My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:
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I don’t really like it. It’s very plain. The
background is boring. It’s really hard to read the text that says ‘Ignition’ on
top of the checked shirts. Also, I wouldn’t say that the image looks like a
front cover image. It would look better with text down the sides. The font for
the title is good – simple and bold. I also like the fact that Becky is in
front of the word Jukebox because it looks professional and it brings her
forward.
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