Front Cover #2 - Feedback

My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:

   I like this one a lot more. It’s a nice photo and I like the fonts. I think it’s a good idea to include something like free posters because it’ll inspire people to buy your magazine. You’ve got quite a few different articles so that makes it look more interesting. And your main band, Platinum City, has a bigger font so it’s very clear what the main article is. I think it needs more colour though because it looks a bit bland at the moment. And the image needs a bit more editing to look really professional. And maybe change some of the fonts and move them around to fill all the space on the page.