My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:
I like this photo the best. It’s more exciting than the other two so it belongs on a front page more. And this one’s got more colour. And it looks more like the competing magazine you showed me so you can tell it fits its genre. The layout is really professional but I don’t like the font I think it looks a little childish. Also I think it’s a little too dark.
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