My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:
This one is really clean and professional. The red in the colour scheme stands out and really draws your attention in. Some of the text really blends in with the background so you might want to change that and make it stand out a bit more. I like the new placement on the Platinum City bit, I think that looks a lot better. It’s definitely improved a lot.
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