Contents Flatplan RE-REVISED

This has a lot more going on and is more visually interesting. It also obeys more codes and conventions. It mixes together these two contents pages and adopts conventions from both:

Having the editors note means that I can have a more personal touch on my magazine. As well as this, my page looks more full and complete now. It fixes the dullness problem that I was worried about across my pages. My focus is still on the image and that hasn't changed. I feel as if these changes in the revision have not only made my page more visually exciting but it looks cleaner and more professional.