My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:
The new thing at the bottom and the new barcode make it look a lot more professional and I think the fonts look a lot better. The black behind the text makes everything really stand out and it’s eyegrabbing. And I like the way you’ve changed the contrast on the image and added red into the shadows. It’s edited really nicely so that it’s eye grabbing. I don’t have any complaints on this one.
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