Contents Page #3 - Feedback

My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:

The editor’s note looks more fancy here and I like that you’ve got a signature on it. It makes it seem more personal. And I think it’s clearer which page is associated with which article. The yellow also really directs your attention in. The features bit looks a bit out of place though because it appeals to a younger audience and the rest of the page is really mature. I don’t know though because I know you have a mixed target audience.