Contents Page #4 - Feedback

My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:

The layouts changed to be more like Kerrang’s now. The bit along the bottom where it asks you to subscribe looks professional. I like that. I like the new font as well. It’s mature and it matches the rest of the page. And the line along the top where it says Jukebox, is that new? That looks good.