Tuesday, 24 January 2017

Contents Page #6 - Feedback

My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:

Yeah, this looks better now that you’ve filled the extra space. And the black really makes them stand out. I like it. I think it looks really bold and good. I don’t have any complaints. 

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