My cousin is a member of my target audience as he is a twenty year old man with a well-paying job who enjoys indie music. I asked him to look at the draft I've done and give me one-on-one feedback to help me improve:
This one’s got a lot more colour. That makes it stand out and there’s contrast with the reds. You can see the highlights a lot better too. I don’t know if I like it. I think it might be too much and I think the contrast is a little bit too much. Maybe if it were slightly less saturated it would look better. I think you needed to add some colour but this was a bit too much.
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